Title: “Layered Consequences”
Part 3: The Door Opens
Panel 1
[Scene: Knock knock. Everyone freezes. Morrissa, Narri, and Peppi turn toward the door. Morrissa looks hopeful. Peppi wipes her eyes.]
SFX: Knock Knock
Peppiqhilala (soft gasp):
“J-Jarru?”
Panel 2
[Jarruwano walks in confidently, his blazer slightly undone. He’s smiling, casual, unaware.]
Jarruwano:
“Hey.
Where’s that peach milkmoon cake you said you made?”
Panel 3
[Narriven crosses his arms and leans smugly against the counter. Behind him, the empty plate is visible.]
Narriven (mocking):
“Oh. That?
It was delicious.”
Panel 4
[Morrissaava points directly at Narriven, face flushed with rage. Jarruwano’s eyes widen.]
Morrissaava (yelling):
“HE ATE YOUR CAKE!”
Panel 5
[Full panel. Jarru clenches his fists, a dark aura rising. Peppi clutches the wall, eyes wide.]
Jarruwano (furious):
“You WHAT?!”
Peppiqhilala (panicking):
“Oh no. Please… not the living room again…”
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