Title “Batter & Bruises”
Part 4: The Rebake Ultimatum
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Panel 1
[Scene: Jarruwano winds up and smacks Narriven on the upper arm. Not too hard—but with righteous offense.]
📣 SFX: POP!
📣 Jarruwano (angry):
“That cake was sacred!
Morrisa made it for me!”
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Panel 2
[Morrissaava crosses her arms, looking both flattered and furious.]
📣 Morrissaava (grumbling):
“He’s lucky I didn’t throw the whisk at him first.”
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Panel 3
[Jarru towers over Narriven, pointing firmly at him.]
📣 Jarruwano (demanding):
“You’re going to bake it again. From scratch.
Peach. Milk. Moon-glaze. The works.”
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Panel 4
[Narriven folds his arms dramatically, turning away with closed eyes.]
📣 Narriven (flatly):
“Nope.
You can’t make me do anything.
Nope nope nope.”
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Panel 5
[Jarruwano grits his teeth, glaring. Morrissa smirks behind him. Peppi peeks back in, hopeful.]
📣 Jarruwano (growling):
“I love you, Morrisa…
But your brother is a pain in my ass.”
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